First of all, I love the concept for this. You were straight into the action. No info on what business took Edward away, or what Bella had been doing to keep herself occupied in his absence, just right in at the reunion. And I loved it. The other details may have distracted from the emotion and desperation of your characters.

As a reader, I felt like my own anticipation grew and heightened along with Bella’s as Edward teased and manipulated her body.

The emotion and passion you conveyed through this story was exceptional. I love this line – ““Shhh… I know, but I need to make you feel good first. I won’t last long,” he whispered, almost… sadly.”

Even though this is a short piece, I’m not left wanting with regards to the level of Bella and Edward’s connection to each other. His need to please her and put her needs first, him knowing that although she ‘wants’ him – he needs to touch her first.

Bella’s acceptance, albeit slightly reluctant, of his plea in turn gives him what he wants, without either party sounding selfish.

Edward’s loss of control was also beautifully written. There was a roughness to it that was sexy as hell, but at the same time he was relentless and sweet.

I really loved reading this piece – as I do with all of your writing – and I’m glad you took part in Nina’s birthday gift.

But it was the writing that made me go thud.

This was worth the wait!

I never get tired of your writing, it’s wonderful. You make things erotic whilst retating the romance and connection between the two. The evolution of their relationship is both sweet and well crafted, I’m so glad they open up more now. I really hope you’re going to write more of this series, it read as though this might be the last one. I really, really hope not as I seem to remember some other ideas that you had that sounded really good.

Please consider writing some more of the patience and practice series!

Looking foward to the book now, sending extra creative vibes to you!

I love seeing glimpses into their growing intimacy. I cannot wait to get the full story.

Simply amazing as always!