Comments on: Vino Veritas

By: princesspewo

princesspewo — Mon, 16 Nov 2009 22:31:30 +0000

Thanks to Vino Veritas my husband will get laid tonight. I really can’t wait for your book to be published. You will always be one of my favorite authors. Great work!

By: Silver Bee

Silver Bee — Tue, 29 Sep 2009 08:01:33 +0000

There is something so adorable about dirty talking Edward. It also gives me the tingly chills too.

But it was the writing that made me go thud.

By: Vixen

Vixen — Tue, 18 Aug 2009 02:03:37 +0000

Thank you, the tenderness and love was something I was hoping to channel.

By: Vixen

Vixen — Tue, 18 Aug 2009 01:57:41 +0000

Thank you so much!

By: Vixen

Vixen — Tue, 18 Aug 2009 01:46:46 +0000

Coming from you, that means alot.

By: Vixen

Vixen — Tue, 18 Aug 2009 01:46:35 +0000

Thank you! I am so glad you liked it!

By: CullenBabe86

CullenBabe86 — Sun, 16 Aug 2009 01:21:01 +0000

Great job Tiffany! Absoultely loved this one. Again *fans self* I didn’t realize how dirty of a mouth Edward has. I also love that you kind of included a little history that tells us what happened after the last posted chapter. Nice!

By: getshorty

getshorty — Tue, 11 Aug 2009 15:06:10 +0000

Dayum!!! Tiff, that was hands down the HOTTEST sex I have ever read in fan fic and I’ve read a lot of scenes. I know it has to do with the complete and total adoration I have for these two, the knowledge of how far they have come in their love, sigh. Edward was so sweet and patient and loving with her, everything you would expect a partner to be, and likewise, she is so adorable in her innocence.

This was worth the wait!

By: Ladyreader

Ladyreader — Tue, 11 Aug 2009 00:21:10 +0000

Well that was certainly worth the wait! ;~)

I never get tired of your writing, it’s wonderful. You make things erotic whilst retating the romance and connection between the two. The evolution of their relationship is both sweet and well crafted, I’m so glad they open up more now. I really hope you’re going to write more of this series, it read as though this might be the last one. I really, really hope not as I seem to remember some other ideas that you had that sounded really good.

Please consider writing some more of the patience and practice series!

Looking foward to the book now, sending extra creative vibes to you!

By: ciaobella27

ciaobella27 — Mon, 10 Aug 2009 14:04:49 +0000

Tiffany – that was just unreal. I miss your Edward a lot. And Drunk, Dirty Talking Edward just makes my life. So freaking hot!!!

I love seeing glimpses into their growing intimacy. I cannot wait to get the full story.

Simply amazing as always!

By: Tracy

Tracy — Sun, 09 Aug 2009 17:49:15 +0000

That was hot as hell.I love the way Edward coaxed gently, knowing how she thinks, he was able to open her up, let her take her time and explore. That’s the beauty of this story, they really got to know each other as friends which only helped with their physical relationship. Thanks for writing this, you are an incredible writer an am looking forward to the novel.

By: ginasparkles

ginasparkles — Sun, 09 Aug 2009 03:28:52 +0000

Absolutely outstanding. My mind is in overload again. I am anxiously anticipating further updates, and your book. Thank you!!

By: AmoreTwilight

AmoreTwilight — Sat, 08 Aug 2009 21:46:49 +0000

So well written. I love being in Edward’s head in your story. He is so loving and thoughtful and naughty all at the same time and of course fabulous!

I loved the way Bella was able to break out of her shyness with the help of a little wine to explore their sexuality. Also loved how Edward asked her to put her mouth on him and then ride him. He was trying hard not to overwhelm Bella yet get her to expand their experiences. It was perfect!

By: latuacantante4him

latuacantante4him — Sat, 08 Aug 2009 16:40:46 +0000

I love how he gently and patiently pulls Bella out of her shyness. The way he talks to her and what he says during sex sets my lady parts on fire. He encourages her, lets her explore at her pace without embarrassing her for her inexperience. I love that he isn’t just all about the sex. It’s about them, together, learning about and loving each other. I found this so sensual and and yet heart warming at the same time. Love, love, love it. Thanks!!!

By: Twilightedobsessed09

Twilightedobsessed09 — Sat, 08 Aug 2009 14:44:09 +0000

Wonderful writing! Really loved Edward’s POV of the sex scenes and coaxing Bella through it. I found it so erotic, his determination was such a turn-on in this. Glad to see Bella letting go a bit, she’s getting there learning to be comfortable sexually more and more with Edward. Can’t wait for your next update….

By: dolphin62598

dolphin62598 — Sat, 08 Aug 2009 14:35:32 +0000

That was AMAZING Tiffany!! I LOVED that Edward! That must have been a blast writing him with so many of his walls and restrictions down!! Can’t wait to read the shower scene!!

By: Nic

Nic — Sat, 08 Aug 2009 07:13:37 +0000

See, I was so… squeeing, slack jawed, fricking speechless last night that I forgot to comment. Le sigh…

Let’s rectify that, hmm?

As always, you own my soul my dear. I love MW, you know I do. I love how free he’s becoming, and that B is finally loosening up around him too… well, with the help of liquor. But hey, *I* don’t mind that. Ha-ha!

It makes me happy to see him and her happy and together. YAY!

This turned out so awesome, I loved it, I just did. So light and playful, so loving and sweet, and SO hot and naughty all rolled into one.

*muah* <3

By: Capricorn75

Capricorn75 — Sat, 08 Aug 2009 04:24:31 +0000

Nothing gets me so hot and worked up like one of your sex scenes with Edward and Bella. It is just so raw and real and realistic and hits all my senses…my favorite thing is Edward talking. I wish they’d talk a little more during sex, but I think that’s just because (TMI alert) I am such a talker and like seeing that incorporated into fanfic. And your characters talk the way I do instead of the ‘porn talk’ you read in most fanfiction.

By: Janet

Janet — Sat, 08 Aug 2009 02:00:36 +0000

Beautiful writing as always. What is the statistic — 90 percent of sex happens in the brain? You’ve shown that wonderfully here, that the connection isn’t just physical and that it’s more WHO is doing WHAT than what is being done. Love the non-formulaic internal narrative and all of the swirling descriptions.

What I want to know is if we’ll ever see this part: “I lost my train of thought anyway, groaning at the reminders of pinning her against the door of her dorm, of losing control those first nights, my aggression taking her breath away… I wanted her so fucking badly then, jerking off four fucking times a day” because you know, I need to be in on that scene, too.

By: StarLightSuccubus

StarLightSuccubus — Sat, 08 Aug 2009 00:33:11 +0000

Loved it!

You rocked girl…. I loved her three questions, and how he is with her.
I love the kind of relationship they are building and the transition we saw in this outtake.

I love how you always manage to make Marineward so fucking sexy but in a way that I dunno. How he makes Bella seem so feminine, and how he is rough and masculine and he loses control and OMFG, just perfect and emotional…

You always leave me feeling something in my chest… It’s not the smut or anything… it’s the intimacy of the moment… The feelings involved in the writing and the magnificent wording you use.

You rock and I lurve you HARD! Keep up the good work and can’t wait to see what’s next… *winks*

XOXO,

Karla