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August 7th, 2009 at 9:11 am
Simply divine. Your insight into Edward’s thoughts is staggering. Good writing of this sort is all in the subtle details, for example, the light cast by the fire in this case. Lovely work.
August 7th, 2009 at 11:16 am
HOT. omg. HOT.
Bravo, definitely well worth the wait. I noticed you changed some words around today, not that I mind or anything because they were both hot, but the other way was so damn dirty. lol. i loved it.
August 7th, 2009 at 12:15 pm
OH HOLY HELL!!! That was so intensely hot! I LOVED it!!
August 7th, 2009 at 1:03 pm
That was AWESOME.
Your writing, with all its glorious subtlety, never fails to leave me with my jaw on the floor (and sweat on my brow, but I digress)
I was just thinking of this story (well, specifically the book) yesterday. I can’t wait!
August 7th, 2009 at 1:07 pm
So damn good! Hot, sexy and so damn loving. Really enjoy the way you write Edward; the way you portray his voice and emotions. Love your words! Thank you!
August 7th, 2009 at 1:34 pm
Hell yea’ I enjoyed that! *Sigh* I figured if Bella could talk a little naughty, I could too. So awesome, so hot, so much more than I thought it would be! Not that I was doubting or anything, but it was so long and it covered so much – I think I may have a new favorite in the P&P series! So thank you so much for the best read I’ve had in a while!
As for ideas for upcoming scenes… I do remember you suggesting a certain scene where Edward attempts to teach Bella how to use a gun. If YOU thought that would be the hottest of all the other choices (at that given time) – I’m sure as hell on board! I can’t wait for the next scene, and I’m even more excited to hear how your novel is coming along! Good luck with the editing!
August 7th, 2009 at 2:16 pm
I loved it. I love that Bella is stepping out of her comfort zone and the Edward is trying to slowly open himself up to her rather than shocking her with his thoughts and desires.
This whole chapter was hot and sexy. Really well written – so glad I got to leave a comment this time
Hope the book is coming alone nicely – can’t wait
August 7th, 2009 at 2:23 pm
“motherfucking bingo?
LOVED it! So hot, and that line right there, priceless!!!
Thanks for writing another amazing piece. I’ve missed reading your words.
Mel
August 7th, 2009 at 4:06 pm
That was really hot AND in character. Well worth the wait, quite good.
August 7th, 2009 at 4:33 pm
Loved it!
You rocked girl…. I loved her three questions, and how he is with her.
I love the kind of relationship they are building and the transition we saw in this outtake.
I love how you always manage to make Marineward so fucking sexy but in a way that I dunno. How he makes Bella seem so feminine, and how he is rough and masculine and he loses control and OMFG, just perfect and emotional…
You always leave me feeling something in my chest… It’s not the smut or anything… it’s the intimacy of the moment… The feelings involved in the writing and the magnificent wording you use.
You rock and I lurve you HARD! Keep up the good work and can’t wait to see what’s next… *winks*
XOXO,
Karla
August 7th, 2009 at 6:00 pm
Beautiful writing as always. What is the statistic — 90 percent of sex happens in the brain? You’ve shown that wonderfully here, that the connection isn’t just physical and that it’s more WHO is doing WHAT than what is being done. Love the non-formulaic internal narrative and all of the swirling descriptions.
What I want to know is if we’ll ever see this part: “I lost my train of thought anyway, groaning at the reminders of pinning her against the door of her dorm, of losing control those first nights, my aggression taking her breath away… I wanted her so fucking badly then, jerking off four fucking times a day” because you know, I need to be in on that scene, too.
August 7th, 2009 at 8:24 pm
Nothing gets me so hot and worked up like one of your sex scenes with Edward and Bella. It is just so raw and real and realistic and hits all my senses…my favorite thing is Edward talking. I wish they’d talk a little more during sex, but I think that’s just because (TMI alert) I am such a talker and like seeing that incorporated into fanfic. And your characters talk the way I do instead of the ‘porn talk’ you read in most fanfiction.
August 7th, 2009 at 11:13 pm
See, I was so… squeeing, slack jawed, fricking speechless last night that I forgot to comment. Le sigh…
Let’s rectify that, hmm?
As always, you own my soul my dear. I love MW, you know I do. I love how free he’s becoming, and that B is finally loosening up around him too… well, with the help of liquor. But hey, *I* don’t mind that. Ha-ha!
It makes me happy to see him and her happy and together. YAY!
This turned out so awesome, I loved it, I just did. So light and playful, so loving and sweet, and SO hot and naughty all rolled into one.
*muah* <3
August 8th, 2009 at 6:35 am
That was AMAZING Tiffany!! I LOVED that Edward! That must have been a blast writing him with so many of his walls and restrictions down!! Can’t wait to read the shower scene!!
August 8th, 2009 at 6:44 am
Wonderful writing! Really loved Edward’s POV of the sex scenes and coaxing Bella through it. I found it so erotic, his determination was such a turn-on in this. Glad to see Bella letting go a bit, she’s getting there learning to be comfortable sexually more and more with Edward. Can’t wait for your next update….
August 8th, 2009 at 8:40 am
I love how he gently and patiently pulls Bella out of her shyness. The way he talks to her and what he says during sex sets my lady parts on fire.
He encourages her, lets her explore at her pace without embarrassing her for her inexperience. I love that he isn’t just all about the sex. It’s about them, together, learning about and loving each other. I found this so sensual and and yet heart warming at the same time. Love, love, love it. Thanks!!!
August 8th, 2009 at 1:46 pm
So well written. I love being in Edward’s head in your story. He is so loving and thoughtful and naughty all at the same time and of course fabulous!
I loved the way Bella was able to break out of her shyness with the help of a little wine to explore their sexuality. Also loved how Edward asked her to put her mouth on him and then ride him. He was trying hard not to overwhelm Bella yet get her to expand their experiences. It was perfect!
August 8th, 2009 at 7:28 pm
Absolutely outstanding. My mind is in overload again. I am anxiously anticipating further updates, and your book. Thank you!!
August 9th, 2009 at 9:49 am
That was hot as hell.I love the way Edward coaxed gently, knowing how she thinks, he was able to open her up, let her take her time and explore. That’s the beauty of this story, they really got to know each other as friends which only helped with their physical relationship. Thanks for writing this, you are an incredible writer an am looking forward to the novel.
August 10th, 2009 at 6:04 am
Tiffany – that was just unreal. I miss your Edward a lot. And Drunk, Dirty Talking Edward just makes my life. So freaking hot!!!
I love seeing glimpses into their growing intimacy. I cannot wait to get the full story.
Simply amazing as always!
August 10th, 2009 at 4:21 pm
Well that was certainly worth the wait! ;~)
I never get tired of your writing, it’s wonderful. You make things erotic whilst retating the romance and connection between the two. The evolution of their relationship is both sweet and well crafted, I’m so glad they open up more now. I really hope you’re going to write more of this series, it read as though this might be the last one. I really, really hope not as I seem to remember some other ideas that you had that sounded really good.
Please consider writing some more of the patience and practice series!
Looking foward to the book now, sending extra creative vibes to you!
August 11th, 2009 at 7:06 am
Dayum!!! Tiff, that was hands down the HOTTEST sex I have ever read in fan fic and I’ve read a lot of scenes. I know it has to do with the complete and total adoration I have for these two, the knowledge of how far they have come in their love, sigh. Edward was so sweet and patient and loving with her, everything you would expect a partner to be, and likewise, she is so adorable in her innocence.
This was worth the wait!
August 15th, 2009 at 5:21 pm
Great job Tiffany! Absoultely loved this one. Again *fans self* I didn’t realize how dirty of a mouth Edward has. I also love that you kind of included a little history that tells us what happened after the last posted chapter. Nice!
August 17th, 2009 at 5:46 pm
Thank you! I am so glad you liked it!
August 17th, 2009 at 5:46 pm
Coming from you, that means alot.
August 17th, 2009 at 5:57 pm
Thank you so much!
August 17th, 2009 at 6:03 pm
Thank you, the tenderness and love was something I was hoping to channel.
September 29th, 2009 at 12:01 am
There is something so adorable about dirty talking Edward. It also gives me the tingly chills too.
But it was the writing that made me go thud.
November 16th, 2009 at 2:31 pm
Thanks to Vino Veritas my husband will get laid tonight. I really can’t wait for your book to be published. You will always be one of my favorite authors. Great work!